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This is the very beginning of my current project which im praying and hoping to finish.

Scene 1 as it's affectionately called.

Please give me your input. Tell me what you think looks bad or should be changed I would really like to hear what you think. In fact its the main reason this is here so that I can change things while its early.

Things to know:
1. The intro part where its black with the words will have narration. So its kind of empty or boring there on purpose because you're supposed to mainly be listening and theres a tiny bit of light reading and squigly effects to keep people interested I guess.

2. The landscape: yeah.. its a tad squigly but its like 100% FBF. Even so you can tell me if you've got a problem with it and ill see if I can tweak some stuff.

3. The music gets a little dark at the end and its not supposed to be that 'sad/scary' when the town is coming into view so tell me if I should try to change it or not.

Well enjoy and please comment its the main reason this is here.
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~crk183 Oct 19, 2009
What music is it? And can I download it?
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~DemonicBunnyComics Oct 30, 2007   Digital Artist
...damn...
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~Sykey Oct 30, 2007   Filmographer
:lick:
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~DemonicBunnyComics Oct 31, 2007   Digital Artist
seriously...mEGa skills xD
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~Anfang May 3, 2007   Writer
Awesome, very well done. Can't wait to see what comes of it. My only note is that is has a rather 'dark-ish' feel to it. If this is where you're going with it then it's very well done, if it's not intentional t might be something you want to change around.
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~Sykey May 4, 2007   Filmographer
Thanks
no, I like it dark.
I think it wouldn't have any impact if I changed the mood up.
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~MedevalMaiden Feb 5, 2007
Wow, this is really awesome, even though it's short. I really like the 3dness, I don't think I've seen that done as much and you pulled it off really well. The music fits nicely too, methinks. Oh and the intro with the color squiggly lines coming out of the P was really neat, how did you do that?
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~Sykey Feb 13, 2007   Filmographer
Sorry it took so long for a reply. In answer to your P question all I did was take some lines around the P and mask each one. After that all you have to do is smoothly fill in the mask.
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~MedevalMaiden Feb 20, 2007
Lol, that's okay. I'm horribly late with my replies most of the time as well. :XD:

Thanks! :D
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~KenSkaii Jan 30, 2007
I thought that was really cool. the 3d effect was fantastic. The only thing was that there was a line at one point that appeared and disappeared right away . i dont know exactly how o point it out, but it kinda stuck out and bothered me a little. the rest was fine, though.
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